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Ravaged
Author: Mellanie Hewlitt
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(Added on Sep 3, 2002)
(This month 48918 readers) (Total 59324 readers) |
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Kelly was brought to the Dungeon and greeted by a dozen men and women, and received some royal treatment performed by them. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Sep 4, 2002 |
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This one reminds me of a hit and run accident in that it seems to be a random event that just happened without any planning. The presentation is slovenly, based on the complete lack of character development,no semblance of proof reading or editing and the inability of the author to write even a simple declarative sentence. By the way a woman of 1.72 meters is tall, another example of the author's attention to detail. My rating is not based on the review by the numbers system that seems to prevail at this site. My rating means this story is an abject failure at basic erotic writing. (3/10)
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