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Fit Family
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Aug 2, 2002)
(This month 30230 readers) (Total 68865 readers) |
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She had beauty, she had a lovely home, she had a loving husband who did business trips to keep them very rich, she was fit, she had very fit young daughters, she had two of the worst low-lifes come and visit. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
SuperZZZZ
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Jul 20, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable. Believable. Especially liked how the gym was incorporated in restraining her and being used against her rather than it's intended purpose. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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I still like running on the spot the best of the Fit Family Series, hope more series are coming (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Tractortorture
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Feb 18, 2003 |
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I enjoy stories with a mother daughter situation. And this was the story which got me into this site. Dispite some flaws in the writing the content had me hooked. (7/10)
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rcb
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Jan 22, 2003 |
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A bit cumbersome (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
wimple
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Aug 8, 2002 |
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a good,very good content of story for a family situation but to much detail to some of the content to keep the boil of the story hot. (4/10)
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drake7
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Aug 3, 2002 |
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I wasn't able to get past the first three paragraphs. The story itself appealed to me, but the poor writing killed it. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marcus
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Aug 2, 2002 |
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The author's ideas are wasted and ill-served by such a substandard writing style.
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Aug 2, 2002 |
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Nope, still can't get into this guy's style - anyone can give a raw description of events. Pagan, if you want impact: try to get more into what's happening between the ears as well as between the legs. And use a spelling and grammar check - some of the slip-ups really grate. (3/10)
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