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Raping Helena
Author: E.Z. Riter
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(Added on Jul 29, 2002)
(This month 51823 readers) (Total 69614 readers) |
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On their honeymoon, Helena and her husband lose big at the tables in Vegas. She agrees to pay off the debt by being sold to a man to be used as his toy. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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Not bad, but a big step backwards in comparison to the author's earlier stories...
JJ (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterJoshua
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Jan 10, 2007 |
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This is a very powerful story that really gets me hard. I would love for this to happen to me! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 20, 2006 |
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the story was ok, what i missed was therape and some details (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Aug 17, 2002 |
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This is an OK story, but I would hardly call it rape ... she agreed to it. Also, why did the husband have to be a scumbag? It's a decent read, but I wouldn't put it on my top 30 list. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
luc
(Edit) (Nov 26, 2002)
- I happen to like scumbags actually and would love to see a continuation of this story with the husband's complicity explored more.
Wished it were a little rougher and wish it got more into the nitty-gritty of the wife's degradation.
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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A well-written story in which the author does an excellent job creating empathy for the woman; not much graphic eroticism, but a nice building of tension, which unfortunately is dissipated by a somewhat unsatisfying ending. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LaJan
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Jul 30, 2002 |
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Interesting story with a terrific build-up to a very unsatisfying climax! There was so much more that could have happened with this story and it petered out at the end. Oh well, the author has great talent so bookmarking E.Z.Riter is a good idea for a while. Maybe next time, consistancy of great tone will pay off with a great story as well. Peace. LaJan (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Terry Gabriola
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2002)
- Yes, I agree with you about the ending being a bit weak. But the author deserves a bit of encouragement - there's a lot of much worse stuff around.
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Nitrofox
(Edit) (Aug 17, 2002)
- Have you checked out his other stories? Read "My Inheritance." It's the greatest story I've ever read.
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Jul 30, 2002 |
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Good work compared with most of what's here - a fairly literate and believable attempt to get into the minds of the people involved, leaving much of the purely descriptive stuff to the imagination. (8/10)
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