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Ashley In Trouble
Author: Pick Up Man
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(Added on Jul 28, 2002)
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Three young girls are kiddnapped and are on their way to be sold at a sex slave auction, but they may get lucky and just end up on a BDSM sex slave farm. |
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| Reviewer:
cymbidia
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Jan 4, 2006 |
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Good ideas. Bad everything else. Spelling and grammar editors are standard on all word processing programs in wide use, aren't they? (2/10)
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Engineer
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Aug 14, 2005 |
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A few good ideas became sunk in a sea of nonsense and bad language. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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the story idea had great potential, that is a far as it went (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
LoveDiver
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Nov 16, 2002 |
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wrong dude (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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Ditto Jonathan and boccacio. I gave it and extra point as I read it with the update. To be fair I forced myself to read through till the end of chapter 2. I was fair, the author certainly wasn't.**Note to author, the forums is an excellent resource, maybe you can get a proof reader to assist you.** (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Aug 6, 2002 |
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I agree with Boccaccio. I rate this a '1' (Very poor in content, with writing skills
bordering on illiteracy).
The author says, "Please excuse my typos as I am new at computers also."
No, I won't, and neither should he.
I am amazed that this person thinks this level of incompetence is
acceptable or excusable. He apparently lacks the wit to be embarrassed by his
own ineptitude.
So much for writing skills. As to content, there isn't any. Three girls are
kidnapped and awaken in barred cells. That's it. What are we doing here,
posting this a sentence at a time? Before posting a story, wait until you've
actually got one. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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Sorry, but you lost me with half a dozen grammatical errors in the first few paragraphs (on top of several in the Author's Note). If the author didn't take time to read his/her story carefully, why should we? (1/10)
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peachmellon
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Jul 29, 2002 |
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~~smiling~~ i cant wait to read more, i am in anticipation now..lol.. ty so much for your writings. i really enjoy your stories
applemelody@aol.com (10/10)
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