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The Humiliation of Jane
Author: Various Authors
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(Added on Sep 21, 2000)
(This month 146438 readers) (Total 190864 readers) |
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In order to teach this little arrogant girl a lesson, the magic gas was used on her so that she would obey every orders from anyone. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Now where would we be without magic gas, heh? Just like mkemske said, the story's kick-off is some absurd gag that the Brothers Grimm might have thought of.
But once the smoke has set, and Jane is being 'taken care of', the story is a great read.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Maitre1962
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Nov 27, 2007 |
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Good story! :) I enjoyed it a lot (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kamf1978
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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I read this story a very long time ago and i still go back and re read the earlier chapters. The later chapters went a bit to far in my opinion but the start was and still is one of the best stories ever written.
One of my biggest disappointments was that we never read about what her brother and his friends made her do after he took her over to meet them. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Mar 2, 2005 |
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Rating is for the earlier chapters -- but I agree it's one of the earliest MC stories I read that still sets the bar high. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 2, 2004 |
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great story, but completely unrealistuc, but that is what makes erotica soo good, you can take a truely fictional situation, make it a GREAT story and still not believable Kodo's 2U (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
weaseltooth
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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wonderfull stuff, this! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
secretworld
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Jan 24, 2002 |
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The first MC story I ever read online, and still one of the best. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
tedmyg |
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Mar 2, 2001 |
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Very good story, excited!!
but, if you delete happy end story which would not
fit for her .
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Big Den |
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Feb 20, 2001 |
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Great sex story, loved the mind control concept. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Sep 28, 2000 |
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Magic gas indeed! Whatever works to get this tale going. Lots of forced sex, humiliation, incest and a good section on sexy outfits, plus a complete cast of characters who have no redeeming features; all this is good. Dialogue, grammar, repetiveness and a heroine with the intelligence and personality of a couch; all this is not good (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Sep 25, 2000 |
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Interesting premise, but it got boring fast. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
kitti |
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Sep 24, 2000 |
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It was good. Very imaginable, I loved the gas idea. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
daxstone |
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Sep 21, 2000 |
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this is a hot mind control story which leaves you wanting more. (9/10)
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