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Master's Hand Author: subtle
(Added on Jul 15, 2002) (This month 48135 readers) (Total 53383 readers)
A poem, relating a scene where innocent back scratching becomes a bit more like an endurance test...and to escape the pinching pain, the sub must come closer into her Dom's embrace. An ironic and erotic twist.

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Average Rating: (5.5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
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Reviewer: ropebinder (Edit) Rating: Mar 23, 2005
As so often happens with poetry, I'm sure the author and the person for whom she wrote it felt it was insightful and expressive, but I found it boring and trite. Sorry. (4/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Dec 26, 2004
A good erotic ultra-short. Communicates feelings well. (7/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Mar 6, 2004
just ok (5/10)

Reviewer: InternalyDriven (Edit) Rating: Aug 9, 2002
As an "Idealist" Master who strives to provide spiritual intimacy for my submissive mate, and seeking continuous self-renewal within myself...one good poem deserves another good one in response. So here goes...just for you subtle.<br>............my sweet one whom I've never met!<br>When you begin to listen<br>And hang on every word,<br>You get an INTUITION.<br>Your mind is now your lord.<br>You hear this voice, DEEP INSIDE YOU,<br>The voice you've heard before.<br>This voice has been there for you.<br>This voice has opened doors.<br>As just a little girl,<br>You found a special friend,<br>This voice told you, "Just do it!<br>Your joy will never end!"<br>Remember all those times<br>This voice was in your MINE.<br>It will be there forever,<br>Until the end of time.<br>In only a few seconds,<br>If you should hear this voice,<br>You can really TRUST it,<br>Let it make YOUR choice.<br>This voice now whispers to you<br>The thoughts that COME between<br>Your thoughts, INSIDE YOUR HEART,<br>The wishes DEEP WITHIN.<br>The wishes YOU'RE DENYING,<br>The ones YOU'RE LONGING for.<br>This voice tells you, "Just do it.<br>STEP THROUGH THAT OPEN DOOR".<br>Leave all your cares BEHIND you,<br>YOUR FUTURE NOW UNFOLDS.<br>YOU'RE FREE from society's holds.<br>Take in what is before you,<br>EMBRACE IT IN YOUR SOUL.<br>ALLOW IT DEEP WITHIN YOU,<br>And LET IT FILL THAT HOLE.<br>THIS VOICE knows what YOU'RE THINKING.<br>THIS VOICE is VERY WISE.<br>Just TRUST your INTUITION,<br>And FOLLOW its advice. <br> (6/10)

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