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Rubber Dog
Author: blueeagle
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(Added on Mar 15, 2015)
(This month 188984 readers) (Total 188984 readers) |
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A young girl from the German countryside looks for a place where to stay in Berlin. She is ready to offer certain services to the landlady but soon understands that she has been trapped. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
rv_ran
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Apr 1, 2015 |
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A good read, the author obviously has a clear idea that they are trying to portray, I give it an 8/10, I knocked off a point for the shortness and lack of detail but there really is something interesting to read here. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 18, 2015 |
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Nice idea but poorly worded. I understand the author hasn't got English as first language (neither do I, for that matter) but that cannot be an excuse for the lacking punctuation and grammar.
There's dictionaries and proof readers.
Secondly, the overall tone of the story is one of 'stupid girl versus evil smart bunch of women' with altercations which go too far for my suspension of disbelief.
The author is too easy on all sorts of unreal implementations and actions and to boot rushes the story like there's no tomorrow.
Some descriptions are quite good, but in the whole, the story lacks in depth and building of the characters.
With a bit more thought and time put to it, this story could become something out of the ordinary.
As it stands, it is mediocre at its best.
JJ (5/10)
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