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Story of my self torture
Author: Debbie
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(Added on Jan 28, 2015)
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I\'m a female that loves to torture my breasts and my vagina for sexual pleasure. Using the most outrageous things like electrical tens units and insects |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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Mar 16, 2016 |
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Good story, very hot idea of torturing uterus with ants, but I think author should focus more on the torture itself. But all description of torture is "It was 45 min". Why so poor with that? Describe the feeling of running ants through the cervix, how they bite the uterus from inside, the pain, and masochistic pleasure... it will be much better ending of such a hot story. (8/10)
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1rugby
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Feb 9, 2015 |
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Please keep writing!
(8/10)
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gilgamekk
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Feb 4, 2015 |
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I am a particular fan of predicaments like this so I really enjoyed this tale. That being said, it would be better if there were a bit more details about the actual experience, not just the setup. Please keep writing! (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2015 |
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Not bad for a self-torture story.
Too many errors for comfort though.
Plus, a bit rushed as well. I would have liked a more descriptive style instead of seeing you race through a list of nasties to inflict on oneself and orgasming a plenty in a spot where the story should really take off...
Story is written like most men have sex: an elaborate though unfulfilling foreplay and then 15 seconds of humping while already grabbing for the "after-the-deed" cigarette.
Take your time, tell a story instead of tearing through the landscape like a freight train on the loose, leaving pieces of a good tale scattered along the railway.
JJ (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Jtee
(Edit) (Jan 30, 2015)
- dear JJ
thanks so much for reading my story. And given me a good rating on it. It was my first time writing about one of my self torture sessions. I will take in consideration what you said. I know there were errors in punctuation spelling etc. I was using a voice typeing program. I should have proof read it before I sent it out. But rest assure I'm better at torturing myself to orgasm rather than writing about it. If you have any devious ways that I could inflict pain on myself give me some ideas. Thanks again, Deb
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