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Conditioning
Author: Karen Kay
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(Added on Jan 28, 2015)
(This month 32287 readers) (Total 32287 readers) |
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After a divorce a white couple decide to get back together. The husband learns that his wife has been trained by a dominant black master while they were seperated |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 29, 2015 |
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Not one of Karen's best. Way too much elaborating about stuff that doesn't matter -except for when this should become a novel-length story, which I doubt.
I would have left out all the mumbo-jumbo about paul's company and the reason why Paul and Amanda got a divorce. They had a divorce, point. No need to explain why or how in this kind of tale.
Story isn't "bad", but the explanatory intermezzos detract too much from the main focus.
Too bad.
JJ (6/10)
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