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Mom's Lessons
Author: LaJan
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(Added on Jun 24, 2002)
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A mean teenage girl has her mother attacked by boyfriend's gang. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
LaJan
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Jul 1, 2002 |
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I wrote this story and another because of requests. Most of my other work is softcore and published elsewhere. Thank you for reading. (8/10)
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MondaysChilde
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Jun 25, 2002 |
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Well written short story. Good command of the argot, reminiscent of Hubert Selby. Deserves more than 3 stars. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
LaJan
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2002)
- I thank you very much for the insightful review! As always, the feedback makes it all worthwhile but the good comments make the author smile! I appreciate your kind words! Peace. LaJan
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jun 25, 2002 |
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What goes around, comes around, seems to be the moral of this little tale. The writing isn't bad, the distractions minimal and the ending is quite fitting. This author shows some promise and should consider lengthier stories. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
LaJan
(Edit) (Jul 30, 2002)
- Thanks a lot for the great review! I really appreciate honest comments coming from intelligent people. This was a very quick story just to see if I could write in this style. After all my romantic stories and poems, this was the first attempt at edginess. If you haven't read "Making Bubba" yet, please be my guest and review it as well. If that "tome's" length isn't what you were looking for, I don't know enough words yet! LOL! Thank you once again for your comments. Peace. LaJan
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