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Lady in Waiting
Author: WaterStar
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(Added on Jun 18, 2002)
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She was lonely, looking for love, but she found her Master of the Commanders very persuasive indeed. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Sailor861
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Oct 26, 2004 |
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As a first effort, this is a pretty good read; however, I agree the author should bring the central character to life. Too often in early works by authors, the heroines are cardboard-like characters who know nothing else but the carnal activities that befall them. Why not spend a little time telling the reader who this person is, where she came from, what she thinks and says and does, as a real person. But for first effort, not bad at all. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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Every so often I read one of these stories in hopes that I'll discover something original or slightly different. Alas, I am disappointed once more. To the author's credit he or she doesn't dwell with loving detail on all the standard things that always seem to befall the brain-dead heroine/slave; for that I am grateful. In passing, the story could have benefited from better proofreading. (4/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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The author's comment "that it seems mild" led me to expect a different sort of story. I found the "commanders" quite nasty indeed; the writing is fair for a first effort, but I didn't find anything strikingly interesting in either the characters or the setting (5/10)
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