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Mrs. Adams, My Neighbor
Author: Perfecto
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(Added on Jun 13, 2002)
(This month 9765 readers) (Total 22454 readers) |
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This is a story of how a young man lost his virginity with his friend's gorgeous mother. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (3/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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This story has a tired storyline, poor grammar and structure, sloppy dialogue, lack of attention to detail - it is all round poor stuff. (2/10)
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bigone
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Jun 19, 2002 |
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Not a very erotic idea, and as the other reviewer has noted, very badly written. Has this author never heard of the difference between the past and present tense? (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jun 17, 2002 |
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Nothing new here; typical teen fantasy. The grammar is horrible and distracting to the point that I found myself laughing at the stupidity of it all instead of having the kind of thoughts that make born again types very uncomfortable. (3/10)
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