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Submit To Me
Author: icechic
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(Added on Jun 4, 2002)
(This month 48503 readers) (Total 58743 readers) |
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A story about submitting to bondage... |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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Very interesting approach. To me it read more like poetry instead of a story or at the very least the thoughts as they ran through his mind. Only the last couple of paragraphs seem to stray from that pattern. I like the approach because as he is asking questions, you tend to ask yourself the questions as well trying to discover if you are on the same page so to speak. Is this what you would do ? Is this how you would react ? It leaves more to the reader's imagination which is usually always a good formula for a good story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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Jul 1, 2003 |
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I enjoyed the insight icechic offers.
(7/10)
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