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The Surprise

Part 1

The Surprise


       You come home to find me curled up sleeping on the couch. Sitting down beside me, You brush Your lips against mine. My eyes flutter open and as I see Your face above me I smile softly. “Hello Master”.  Stroking my hair You say “Hello pet, I hope that you have completed all of your chores for the day?”  I nod quickly “Oh yes Sir, all of them”.  You smile and place a quick kiss on my lips “Wonderful pet, I am pleased.  W/we are going to go somewhere tonight pet, somewhere special” My eyes light up “Where Master, tell me where please.” I beg.   “Oh no, its a surprise pet. Now go and get dressed, wear the short black dress please. You know, the one I like so much.” I scramble from the couch and fly to the bedroom.  I quickly emerge wearing the asked for dress.


       “Very good pet, what are you wearing under the dress little one?” You ask.  Blushing I reply “Nothing Master”. Smiling You place a quick kiss on my cheek and pull a blindfold from Your pocket.   I look at it apprehensively and then stare into Your eyes.  “I know you hate wearing these pet, but I want you to, o.k?  Do it for Me?”   I nod my head and You place the blindfold over my eyes blocking out the light. I shiver in fear just a bit.  You wrap Your arm around me and whisper into my ear. “Relax pet, this will make the surprise more special”.  You lead me to the car and place me inside, buckling my seat belt for me and close the door.  You quickly get in and start the engine. We race away into the night to a destination unknown to me.  A shiver of excitement and apprehension runs down my spine as my mind races. “Where are W/we going, Will I like the surprise.” I wonder.


       The car stops and You quickly get out and come around to open my door. You lead me up some steps and lightly knock on a door.  The door opens and a soft feminine voice says “Come in, do please, come in”.  W/we are ushered to a room with a fire burning, I can hear the crackling of the flames and feel the heat from the fire.  “So this is Your pet, hmmmm” comes that soft voice.  “Raise your arms over your head little one.” That voice commands.  I whimper softly. “Do as She says pet, now” You whisper into my ear.   I quickly raise my hands over my head and feel the dress pulled off over my head.  I shiver in surprise and fear as I feel the Woman's soft hand touch my left nipple. “Master please”.  I beg.  “Not a word pet, its alright, I am here.  This Woman will be your Mistress, at least for tonight. You will show Her the same respect you show me, is that clear pet?”    “Yes Master.” I whisper.  “Then show her the proper respect slave, kneel” You command.


       I quickly kneel and reach out for her foot. Grasping hold of it I bend over and place small kisses on her foot.  I sit up once more and implore You. “Please Master, can I remove the blindfold, please.”  You respond,  “You are asking the wrong Person pet. Ask your Mistress.”   I sigh and whisper softly “please Mistress, I am afraid of the dark, can I please, please take the blindfold off?”  She softly strokes my hair and replies, “ No little one, W/we will leave it on, for now. Now stand before Me.”  I stand quickly and shiver as I feel her hand caress my nipple once more. “Touch Me as I am touching you little one”. She commands. I reach out in the darkness and lay my hand on her arm. Running my fingers up Her arm to Her shoulder, I then trail my nails down to her nipple. I softly run my nails over her nipple and feel her shiver.


       Suddenly I hear Your voice commanding “Suck on Her nipples pet, now”.   I whimper  “please Master, I cant, please dont make me......”       “Dont argue with Me slave, do as I tell you, NOW!!”  Whimpering softly I nod my head and lean forward to take her left  nipple in my mouth. Shivering at the feel of her flesh between my teeth.  My hand pulls and massages her right nipple as my lips caress her left. I suck her nipple into my mouth and nibble softly as a moan escape Her lips.


       “Take her to the bed please, Milady” Your offer.  “Oh With pleasure Sir, with pleasure”. She replies as she takes me by the hand and leads me across the room. Gently she lowers me onto the end of the bed and I feel the bed shake as She crawls on as well.  “Turn over, on your hands an knees pet, face the top of the bed.”  You command .I obey quickly, whimpering softly. “Please Master, it is so hard to do with the blindfold, cant I please. please.........”.     “ Silence slut, one more word and I will punish you, it that clear” You growl.  I nod in understanding.

       

       “Now slave, I want you to please Her, as I have pleased you in the past, do you understand?”    “I cant Master, please.....”  You growl  “ I told you to keep silent slut, why do you insist on disobeying me tonight? You ask.  “This is very hard for her Sir, she has never done this before correct?” comes that soft voice, almost with the sound of understanding in it.   “This is the first time I have shared her with Another, yes, but it is not her place to question Me.” comes Your icy reply. I feel Your hand grasp my hair and drag me forward on the bed. You push my face down until I feel her shaven pussy against my cheek.  “Obey Me now slut, and know that you will be punished for arguing with Me in front of your Mistress”.


       Whimpering I turn my face into her body and run my tongue gently over her shaved outer lips, shivering at the odd feeling of caressing another woman in such a way.  I insert the middle finger of my left hand between her pussy lips and rub it over the opening to her cunt as I lick her lips.   CRACK...I jump as the blow falls hard on my ass.  “Suck Her clit slut, now, as I punish you for your insolence” You demand.  CRACK.... comes the vicious whip once more as I bury my face in her pussy, finding her clit with my tongue and licking it softly.  She moans and arches her back as the whip strikes once more . CRACK, crying softly I take her clit between my teeth and nibble on it, feeling the burning of my ass.  CRACK, my ass explodes with the pain from the whip as You demand “Fuck her with your fingers slut, make your Mistress cum.”  I plunge two fingers of my right hand deep inside her wet hole and she moans loudly as I pump them into Her.  CRACK, CRACK, and CRACK comes the whip. With every strike on my ass I plunge my fingers deep into her pussy and suck and lick harder and faster on her clit.


       Suddenly I feel Your hands part my cheeks and Your cock plunge deep in my ass.  I cry out with the pain of the sudden intrusion.  You thrust Your cock deep into my ass and with every thrust my fingers are pushed deeper into Her pussy.  I suck her clit into my mouth and nibble on it as my tears soak through the blindfold.  You fuck my ass harder and faster, pushing my face into her clit.  She moans and arches her back.  Your cock pounds faster and harder into me and suddenly I feel the whip again. CRACK it lashes at my back. I cry out in pain and desperately try to focus on the clit in my mouth. CRACK, CRACK, the whip punishes my back, striking with every trust of Your cock into me.   I lick and nibble on Her clit, putting three fingers deep in Her pussy now as You fuck me and whip me.  I cry desperately as I hear Both of You moan with the pleasure.  CRACK, CRACK, CRACK comes the whip, shooting the pain through my spine as You thrust Your cock ever deeper and harder into me.  I slam my fingers deep into Her with every blow and every thrust.  Feeling You shiver inside of me and Her arch her hips, pressing her pussy against my face.  CRACK, CRACK the whip hisses once more as I feel Your cum explode deep in my ass.  Once more She moans and arches her back, burying my face deep as she moans and cums, rocking her hips from side to side, moaning and withering beneath me.


       You pull out of my ass and grab me by the hair. Dragging me off the bed You force me to kneel on the ground.  I hear the bed creak as She stands.  A hand softly moves my sweat soaked hair from my cheek.  I press my cheek into that hand, knowing it is Hers, wanting so much to feel the gentleness of it.  “Cant I give Your slave pleasure now Sir? she has been so good and pleased Us both after all.” She asks You.  “No My slave does not deserve a reward, she argues with Me and she knows that is not allowed.”    “But, it was hard for her and she was scared........” She implores.    “She is Mine Milady and I say when she will be rewarded,” You snap.    “Of course Sir” is her replay.


       Suddenly the blindfold is removed from my face and I stare up, blinded slightly by the light.  Before me is the most beautiful Woman I have ever seen. With long flowing red hair and deep green eyes.  I kneel and smother her feet with kisses and she laughs softly.  “You are a wonderful little pet my dear.” She praises “I would be very glad to have the chance to play with you sometime, and I do mean really play. To take you through the paces if you will.”  I kiss Her foot again and whisper, “It would be an honor Mistress”.  She lightly touches my cheek and smiles down at me. Then looking at You She says “With Your permission of course Sir.”  You answer “Perhaps, someday, yes.  I would enjoy watching You work My slave Milady. However it is late and W/we must be going.”  You look at me and order “Now thank your Mistress for the honor of pleasing her pet. “  I take her left hand in mine and place a kiss there as I whisper “Thank You Mistress”.   You place a robe around my shoulders and quickly lead me from the house.   Once more You place me in the car and as W/we pull away I look up and see my Mistress waving from the porch.


I raise my hand and wave back, a smile on my  lips.  “Master” I whisper  “Yes pet?”    “I am sorry Master, I know I was wrong to question You. I should not have done so and I am sorry”.   “I know pet, but you have to learn to trust me more.”  You say as You reach out and pull me close to You.  “I do trust You Master, I was just scared and well....unsure of Her”.    “I understand little one, now lay your head on my shoulder and rest. W/we will be home in a few minutes.”  Sighing softly I lean against You as You wrap Your arm around me.  I close my eyes and drift off to sleep.   The car stops and You shake me gently “W/we are home My pet, come lets go inside”. I nod and obey following You into the house and to the bed room. 


       “Lay on the bed pet, please” You whisper into my ear. I am so tired I sigh happily and obey. I feel You part my thighs with Your hands as You crawl onto the bed.  Suddenly Your mouth settles on my clit and my eyes fly open with the pleasure exploding there.  You lick and suck on my clit, plunging Your fingers into my pussy.   Moaning I beg “Please Master, mmmm please, let me please You too, let me suck Your cock, mmmmm Master please”.. You chuckle softly and say “As you wish my pet” Turning Your body You straddle my face and lower Your cock against my cheek.  As You take my clit back between Your teeth and plunge Your fingers deep once more.  I lick at Your cock. Taking it deep in my mouth, wrapping my arm around Your ass to pull You down to me.  Feeling You tongue lick and Your teeth nibble.  Rocking my hips and arching my back as I suck You faster and deeper.  You buck Your hips wildly into my face, driving Your cock deep in my throat as You moan.    You chew on my clit as You fuck my face, both of U/us moaning.  The pleasure Your mouth is giving me explodes as I feel Your cock burst in my mouth, Filling my throat with Your cum.  I climax as You fill my mouth moaning against You.  The pleasure subsides slowly and You move to lay beside me.


       “Did you enjoy having a Mistress pet? “ You ask.   “It was...interesting Master., but I guess I enjoyed it, a little, yes.  Knowing it was what You wanted helped a lot. I am sorry for being so difficult Master”.  “Its alright little one, really it is.  You will do better....next time”. With that I shiver a bit and fall asleep thinking, imagining what “next time” will hold. The last thing I hear as I drift off is Your voice chuckling “Yes next time, next time...............”



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