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The Greatest Submission

Part 8

The Greatest Submission

The Greatest Submission

Written by Hawk_Fann and Sbbe, his Slave

Stillbehindblueeyes (at) hotmail (dot) com

 

WARNING!  THIS IS A WORK OF EROTIC BDSM FICTION.  

 

IT IS ADULT ORIENTED MATERIAL OF A SEXUAL NATURE.  

 

DELETE NOW IF YOU DO NOT WISH TO VIEW THIS TYPE OF MATERIAL.

 

 The Author does not condone any of these actions, this is fantasy, make believe, you know day dreaming.

 

 Copyright 2006, Hawk Fann & Sbbe.  All rights reserved.

 

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8

 

“Do you understand?” Kimberly asked leaning in and trying to glare into Sarah’s eyes. Sarah seemed cowed but didn’t nod. “Do you understand Slut?” Slowly Sarah nodded. “Ma’am let me suck the dildo clean. Is what is required or I insert it back up your tight ass and let you suck it clean again.” Sarah looked down and shook her head. She seemed passive. “But first Slut I’m going to let you make up for all the work I went through for you.” Kimberly walked around Sarah and slowly lowered the bar holding her arms till Sarah was laying backward her body still taut and stretched but her face facing up. She lay at a 45 degree angle as if a table was under her.

 

“I’m going to use you to enjoy myself. You are going to be strategic to my orgasm.” She slowly walked forward, she leaned down and placed her mouth on the strap on dildo. Up and down she sucked, feeling her breasts bumping into Sarah’s head and forehead. She worked it till it was wet and then stood. She turned and backed up. Sarah’s eyes were big and round.

 

“Get a good look Slut, you’ll be seeing a lot of this. It’s all you’re good for. No cock till you earn it Slut.” She mounted the dildo slowly and lowered herself till her pussy was full. “Fuck me.” She said, simply, standing above Sarah, looking down past her belly into Sarah’s eyes.

 

A tiny movement and Kimberly almost cried out in relief that she was making some bit of progress. “Good Slut.” She reached down and stroked Sarah’s hair. Sarah tried to jerk away and the dildo in Kimberly shifted hard she groaned in pleasure. “Ok if you like it rough Sarah.” She grabbed Sarah’s hair in both hands yanking her face up and the dildo in deeper. “Oh yes Sarah, I’ll have you doing this often. Get used to my smell Slut, my taste.”

 

Kimberly felt the orgasm rising and rode Sarah mercilessly she gazed unseeing into the camera as the orgasm overwhelmed her. Harder, deeper, she jerked Sarah up, she felt the gush as the orgasm washed over her. “Ahhhhhh,” she screamed, riding Sarah till she almost let Sarah hold her up. “Ohhh, good girl,” she murmured, grinding her groin into the strap on.

 

“Good girl.” She stepped off and turned looking at Sarah’s face. Sarah’s head dropped back uncomfortably. “A good girl should be rewarded. I am going to take the strap-on out and let you say those magic words. I’ll let you clean the juice off, won’t that be a tasty reward, Slut?” She didn’t wait for movement as she lowered Sarah to the floor with the winch. She stepped over her and unfastened the strap lifting. “Ma’am let me suck the dildo clean.” Kimberly said then popped the dildo out and waited.

 

Sarah spit and sputtered, she looked from the dildo to Kimberly’s face then back again. “Ma’am let me suck the dildo clean.” She murmured almost too quietly to hear.

 

“Yes Slut,” she offered the still wet dildo and watched as Sarah sucked it vigorously. “Good Slut,” she said stroking her head and cheek. “It’s time for you to move frames. If you cooperate it will be much easier.”

 

“I’ll cooperate ma’am,” came the hesitant reply.

 

Kimberly smiled, very happy with the words. She reached for a restraint and was surprised to hear her master speak through the special microphone. His voice sounded different. “Kimberly, please report to the viewing room for a consultation.”

 

Kimberly didn’t look back but walked calmly to the door. She sighed and moved forward smiling at her Master. He reached out a hand and she knelt before him taking the hand and placing her cheek in it. “Such a wonderful job. Did you enjoy your orgasm? Your first one by your Slut?”

 

“Yes master,” she said kissing his palm.

 

“Very good, I want you to turn and look at this monitor.”

 

Kimberly watched and saw the subtle nuances that a close up from Camera angle 7 gave. “Is she lying sir?” she asked turning and looking over her shoulder.

 

He smiled and nodded. “This will be a test of your wills.” He reached over and took Kimberly by the hair pulling her back so she leaned into his lap. “I will put on the hood and be ready in case she attacks you. But as your slave she will need to be subdued by you, her mistress.”

 

Kimberly stood over the exhausted woman her eyes were shut her breathing strained. She was in pain just from the extended bondage. Her head drooped back. Kimberly took time to look her over slowly. She had all the time in the world.

 

Kimberly stepped forward and stood between the spread legs. She squatted down. She let her mind focus for a moment, this was her slave. Her very own human. Her master had given her this woman. She took a breath and leaned forward. She gently kissed the neatly trimmed bush before her. Sarah woke and jerked. Kimberly reached up and cupped Sarah’s firm ass. She pressed her lips to hairy flesh waiting.

 

Kimberly stood surprised Sarah had not verbally protested. Sarah’s head raised she looked at Kimberly anger clear. “I own you Slut, every inch of your flesh is mine to do with as I please.” She waited Sarah’s head dropped back and her body relaxed. Kimberly reached out and cupped Sarah’s sex. The warmth in the palm of her hand felt right. She smiled realizing she needed to pee. She walked slowly to the hoist and lifted it again with the remote till Sarah’s head dropped forward. She turned it then walked away toward the toilet in the corner.

 

“Slut, it you behave, I will be able to make you more comfortable.” She sat and emptied her bladder. She watched Sarah and saw the shock as Sarah realized what she was doing. It was enjoyable to watch as Sarah suddenly realized she too had to pee. Her mouth opened and closed again like a fish out of water, then her head dropped. “Ask Slut, ask your Mistress prettily and she will let you relieve yourself.”

 

Sarah shook her head slowly without looking up. Kimberly was pleased she didn’t swear. She washed herself and moved foreword standing directly in front of the woman. She slowly stroked her, her breasts, nipples, down her sides, over her stomach. She slowly got to know the body that she owned. “You take care of your body I see. Now it’s time to take care of your mind Slut.”

 

Sarah tensed, that had gotten her attention. “Everything you’ve learned is wrong.” She fondled between Sarah’s legs with her left hand and kneaded a breast with her right. “You are a slave now and you must learn slave rules. Your mistress is your life, your love. Your every thought is centered on pleasing her/me.” Kimberly slipped a finger between Sarah’s nether lips. Sarah stiffened but didn’t fight. The finger moved up and in, slowly Kimberly entered and retreated until she felt a moisture building. She pulled her finger slowly from the flesh and held it up. “You should always be wet for me Slut, always.”

 

Sarah’s eyes lifted following the wet finger. Kimberly slowly raised it to her lips and sucked it in. “Ummmm,” she said smiling then turned and walked away.

 

Kimberly lifted a bottle of water from the refrigerator and drank of it deeply. She looked around the room and started back to Sarah. “I would think you would like to rinse your mouth. She reached out and snagged a small bottle of mouth wash from the counter. “Slut, beg your mistress creatively.”

 

Kimberly stood waiting, standing arms length from Sarah. It took time and patience but finally after a series of short sharp slaps of her hand on those beautiful breasts Sarah begged. Not very creatively but it was begging. The rinse went well no spitting it into Kimberly’s face but into the little bowl. Kimberly felt very relieved as she started lowering Sarah’s arms. She kept the cuffs fastened but let the chain drop away. ‘See Who I Am’ sounded over the speakers Kimberly smiled and remembered her masters words. It came the moment the last chain dropped. Sarah was strong. Kimberly almost fell but just shifted out of the way.

 

Kimberly stood and watched the woman run. Sarah turned then ran toward the door she’d seen Kimberly use. When she got halfway there it opened. Master leaned against the door frame. He’d changed, black jeans and a black vest hung open, the hood covering his face caused her to kneel and tremble. It took Kimberly a moment to recover, then she stood and stalked toward her slave who stood mouth open, as if her body had turned to stone, staring at the figure in the door way.

 

 

 


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